Seven Moments Screenplay Analysis


There are two things I can do for your screenplay:

  1. I can analyze an existing movie (one that you want to pattern your screenplay after) and provide a detailed breakdown of the movie and how it delivers information to the viewer. Let's say you want to write a screenplay with a story that flows similar to L.A. Confidential. I can dissect the movie and create a blueprint for organizing your story with similar pacing. I can analyze any movie as long as it's available on DVD or Blue Ray and is no more than 100 minutes long. I can do this for $595. Keep in mind I will retain the rights to the blueprint itself and you will simply get a PDF copy of it for your own use.
  2. If you already have a screenplay and you're wanting to polish it up or you simply want another opinion before you start spending tens of thousands of dollars in production, I can provide my unique in-depth analysis along with a detailed breakdown (see below).

Screenplay Analysis

$3,500

(775) 39l-l42l

 

I can analyze your screenplay and provide detailed feedback. Turn around time is 7 to 10 business days. Price is $3,500 for a screenplay up to 120 pages. My input is geared towards a production company that is about to take a screenplay into production (or possibly an actor trying to discern which screenplay to move forward with).

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I've analyzed thousands of movies. I know what excites an audience and what puts an audience to sleep.

 

Please note: I do not provide cover. You can buy cover from hundreds of different online sources for a relatively inexpensive price. The analysis I provide can only be performed by me or by someone who has thoroughly studied the Seven Moments.

 

Production companies: If you have multiple screenplays to choose from, I can help you decide which one is worth your time and money. If you're already moving forward with a particular script, I can definitely help you improve it.

 

Actors: If you're a working actor and you have multiple screenplays to choose from, I can analyze each script and help you choose the one that's going to help your career and not hurt it. I can help you decide which script is worthy of your best efforts.

 

I will do the following for your screenplay:

  • List the weakest scenes (and I'll explain why)
  • List the strongest scenes
  • Expose weak dialogue
  • Expose irrelevant information and/or unnecessary character details
  • Expose storyline inconsistencies
  • Provide storyline suggestions (my suggestions will become your property; no crediting necessary)
In addition to the above items, I will also:
  • Recommend scenes that should be eliminated altogether (and explain why)
  • Provide suggestions on how you can strengthen individual scenes
  • Provide suggestions on how you can strengthen your overall story
My analysis is based on how often the Seven Moments occur within your screenplay and how tightly related they are to each other and to the story. The typical "three act structure" is a nice concept but I don't believe it's nearly as important as the Seven Moments. After all, practically every movie that gets produced today follows the traditional three-act structure but only a small percentage are financially successful.
 

If you would like to read about the Seven Moments, please read The Seven Moments in Storytelling that Really Matter. You can purchase the book on Amazon and view it through your Kindle device or your Kindle viewing software.

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